Slice of Life 4#

By Anonymous -
Tug of War

   I was so tired from playing the games on Games day. My house team, The Titanium Tigers are winning. My friends and I were drinking the punch juice with joyfulness, until Ms.Jenny came and shouted,

"Girls!Girls!Girls! It's our turn now, run!" 

All of us were throwing our drinks away and rushing towards Ms.Jenny. Every girls in Titanium Tigers hold the rope tightly, so do the Golden Gibbons. In my mind, I was think,

"Are we going to win the first game?"

Then I looked over to the other side. I saw many people on that team, they are all tall people with strong arms and legs. It makes me more nervous than before.

"1,2,3 START!" Mr.Komson yelled.

I pulled with all my strenght I had, but I was too tired. I almost fall down and I think will my team loose because of me? I fell down, but luckily all my team mates pull hard enough to hold them back without me. So I contiuned to pull.

"1,2 Pull! 1,2 Pull! 1,2 Pull!" Ms.Jenny and the other boys screamed with excitement.

Everyone followed what Ms.Jenny and the othe rboys shouted and it worked! I looked over again and what did I saw? I saw the Gibbons are almost corss the line! Which means we are winnning.

"Go Titanuim Tigers" Ms.Jenny screamed again.

And "WEEP!" the game is done! I can't believe we won.

"Great job girls!" Ms. Jenny said.

Then we all gave Ms.Jenny a high five.

Comments

  1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2016 at 10:35 PM

    Ching Ching, your story have a mood of excitement, you have added a lot of dialogues, which makes the story more fun to read. Your best sentence was... " pulled with all my strenght I had, but I was too tired. I almost fall down and I think will my team loose because of me? I fell down, but luckily all my team mates pull hard enough to hold them back without me. So I contiuned to pull." I describes a lot of external feelings. P.S some spelling mistakes!

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