Poetry Port-folio

By Anonymous -

Book titled 'Where I'm From'
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 1. What is your favourite? Why?
My favourite poem is "Where I'm From" because I feel like this poem has lots of figurative languages like personification, simile and etc. And I really liked how I describe the settings. One of the setting I described is an aquarium I went to: I am from mermaids and shark fins, Looking around the gigantic aquarium, staring at the enormous octopus,  I am from mysterious animals looking for food with many unknown people tripping over the fences.

2. What was the most challenging? Why?
The most challenging would be finding word choices. I tried to find the perfect word choice for my poem but it's hard because some of the new word choices are the words I don't know. So I have to use the normal word choices.

3. If I had more time, how would you change?
If i had more time, I would like to change all of the word choices I have used. Because I feel like it's not what (words) 7th graders would use.


End of semester update:
My goal for SS was to use more of ss vocabularies more and I did complete that. I used the vocabularies in the test and in my notes. The thing that reminds me to use the vocabularies is my teacher, Ms.Emily and the rubric she posted on the test. And I believed I achieved that because from the test results on the rubric, I saw my teacher highlighted the one with vocabularies on.

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